I am not a native english speaker.I am going to apply a job.Could anyone help to check my cover letter,please?

Dear Sir/Madam,

APPLICATION FOR THE POSITION OF SUPERVISOR.

In response to your advertisement in the “Classified Post” this week, I would like to apply for the position of Supervisor at your company.

I have been working at “Cafe 1882” in a supervisory postion for three years. In this post I have gained experience and built up my leadership skills handling a variety of events like cocktail functions, wedding parties, conference lunches and dinners as well as outside catering. In addition to organizing such events, I have also been required to provide training to my team members on a number of occasions.

I am interested in continuing my career in catering services as I am a communicative person and enjoy interacting with people and enriching my knowledge in the fields of food and wine.

I would appreciate it if I had the opportunity to meet you in person to further discuss my qualifications and my ability to handle the duties and responsiblities of the position.

I hope you take my application into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Very nice, @ZEPHYRA ! My only change would be instead of “I would appreciate it if I had the opportunity…” saying, “I would appreciate having the opportunity…” But I know who I want to help me with editing!! ;D

And good luck, @ckk1984net!

@ZEPHYRA – Great job.. I have a few more tweaks. :)

- You don’t really need the ‘Application for the position of supervisor’ line, since you state in your letter that you would like to apply for the supervisor position. If you like, you can put Objective: Supervisor Position on your resume, it’s just not needed here, in my opinion.

Dear Sir/Madam,

In response to your advertisement in the “Classified Post” this week, I would like to apply for the position of Supervisor at your company.

I have been working at Cafe 1882 in a supervisory position for three years. In this post, I have gained experience and built up my leadership skills through handling a variety of events like cocktail functions, wedding parties, conference lunches and dinners, as well as outside catering. In addition to organizing such events, I have also been required to provide training to my team members on a number of occasions.

I am interested in continuing my career in catering services, as I am a communicative person and I enjoy interacting with people and enriching my knowledge in the fields of food and wine.

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet you in person to further discuss my qualifications and my ability to handle the duties and responsibilities of the position.

I hope you take my application into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely,

@ MY FELLOW-FLUTHERITES, thanks for pointing that out. You are right!