Help with punctuation?

No comma is needed after “So does”. That’s the only change I would make.

Some would place an ‘Oxford comma’ after “Bring it on!”

Your verb has to be plural: “So do” (without the comma). Your subjects are the list of expressions. No comma because you are not quoting dialogue.

The stacked marks of punctuation look weird but are relatively correct. A purist editor would place the comma within the quotes for an American audience (“Bring it on!,” and); I would put it outside on aesthetic grounds. And I do use the series (Oxford) comma.

So does do “Let’s do this thing!”, “Bring it on!”, and “It won’t be the first time someone has called be me a tool of the devil.”

So does, “Let’s do this thing!”, “Bring it on!” and “It won’t be the first time someone has called be a tool of the devil.”

Should probably be:

So does “Let’s do this thing,” “Bring it on!” and “It won’t be the first time someone has called be a tool of the devil.”

The thing that confuses me is the !”,
Normally punctuation always goes inside quotation marks, but there is an exclamation point followed by a comma. Seems weird.

Looks like @Jeruba, the expert on these things, beat me.

@PhiNotPi

That’s because it IS weird! Heh! Drop the exclamation point and add the comma ( with all commas before close quotation ) and you’ll do just fine. Other than that, I agree with Jeruba. : )

Alternative: never mind punctuating as speech and just cite the expressions as expressions:

So do “let’s do this thing,” “bring it on,” and “It won’t be the first time someone has called me a tool of the devil.”

Note initial lowercase and no preceding commas.

If I were your editor, this is what I would suggest.

@Jeruba

Kewl. : )

I don’t actually say it out loud, but it comes up in my head more often than you’d guess, as do: “Let’s do this thing!”, “Bring it on!” and “It won’t be the first time someone has called be a tool of the devil.”

@Jeruba nailed it.

Agreed, follow Jeruba’s advice.