Can someone correct my essay?

If you just need someone to give you some basic feedback about grammar and flow and whatnot, I can do it. I don’t really know anything about the subject matter though.

^^Make sure you get acknowledged as an editor. Part of the grade will belong to you.

@Eggie; Keep your sentences shorter. Use “his” or “her’ if you have a singular subject.

Viz: Is there anyone here who could do that and give me his/her feedback by tomorrow AM at the latest?’

I have an essay to write about graphic organizers for academic reading and writing for an exam this Tuesday, and I would like to write a practice essay for someone to correct it for me.

When the word “and” is used as a conjunction between independent clauses, it is preceded by a comma. Yeah, I guess we can give you some help with basic writing.

I’d do it too, but I don’t even know what graphic organisers are: /

Surely part of the essay would describe graphic organizers.