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Roses are red, violets are blue, I wrote a love poem, how about you?

Asked by King_Pariah (11484points) February 14th, 2012

Ah, you feel that? Love is in the air… Or my neighbors are getting it on… Ugh, old people are nasty!

Anyway, for Valentine’s day, I ended sending a love poem across the US to the one I love. Anyone else here write up some love poetry for their loved one(s) this Valentines? Would you care to share?

Here’s mine:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Oh screw this,
It’s not good enough for you

Truth be told is this,
That no words can ever say,
My feelings of love and bliss,
And how you make me feel this way

Forgive me for these poor substitutes,
Which can never hope to portray,
My tree of love’s roots,
Nor how you brighten my day

My love is like an ocean,
No word can ever describe,
A beautiful melodic tune,
That makes me feel alive

So yes, roses are red,
And violets have a purplish hue,
Forgive me my love for this substitute of passion,
I love you.

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rebbel's avatar

I’d even wish you dead
If I then could be your grave
That way, locked in my arms
You’d forever be mine

Free translation of a Hendrick de Vries poem.

TexasDude's avatar

Lyrics from one of my band’s songs. It’s about someone I really, really love.

Two Pennies

Talks to spiders,

Grows her own trees,

She is the month of May.

Wears the rivers

Like a necklace,

An endless drifting chain.

She holds calves by their muzzles and

Tells me about her day:

“Walked to the store and you know you might have seen me,

We wear the same skin so you know that you could be me.”

I’m your reflection in the lake.

Reaches for branches

On her tiptoes,

And says “it’s time to go!”

Clothed in honey,

Seeds, and dry leaves,

I don’t think she knows.

Makes her own alphabet

From footprints in the snow.

And she says:

“I walked to the store and you know you might have seen me,

We wear the same skin, so you know that you might be me.”

I’m your reflection in the lake.

And you’ve grown on me like moss grows on a stone.

I think about your house when I want to go home.

I’m your reflection in the lake.

I’m whatever you can make.

fundevogel's avatar

One of the Republican candidates (or are they nominees?) wrote a stirring love poem to America.

poisonedantidote's avatar

I love you so much girl, that you make me feel like a nutter.

Perhaps that’s why I used a hunting knife, to smear my balls with butter.

I love you so much, that when I try to say it I stutter.

If you ever leave me, I’ll be found dead in some gutter

Berserker's avatar

No poem, but I’m reminded of this funny thing I saw in a joke book as a kid;

Roses are red, violets are blue,
I’d cross the ocean just to be with you.

PS; I’ll be over on Saturday afternoon if it doesn’t rain.

@The Bastard Those lyrics rule.

Neizvestnaya's avatar

Roses are red, violets are blue
I love guns, sushi & nookie
It’s so fantastic you do too

blueiiznh's avatar

Of course I have, but I don’t write personal prose and tell.

ragingloli's avatar

Roses are red, Violets are blue.
I got 5 fingers, and the middle one is for you.

Roses are red, violets are fine.
I’ll be the six, if you’ll be the 9.

Roses are red, violets are blue.
Vodka costs less than dinner for you.

and the classic:
Roses are red, violets are blue.
In soviet Russia, poem writes you!

wundayatta's avatar

Will you be mine?
Will you be my valentine?
You are so fine!
You are divine!
I wish I could be your only ob-gyn!
All I want to do is cross your goal line!
And run my hand down your spine.
Sit with you beneath the pine
to drink wine.
Take the river cruise down the Rhine
balancing love on this fork’s tine.
I heft my beer in my stein
make obeisance to you: my personal shrine.
I lick your quim and make it shine
knowing that you will never whine
as long as you remember that you are mine!

gondwanalon's avatar

I don’t need no poem
‘cause all I want to do
Is sing and dance
And boogie down
And have my way too

AshLeigh's avatar

Charmanders are red.
Squirtles are blue.
If you were a Pokemon, I’d choose you♥

Oh my jeez, I’m a nerd.

My personal favorite:
Roses are red. Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet, and so are you.
But the roses are wilting. The Violets are dead.
The sugar bowl’s empty, and so is your head. :)

blueiiznh's avatar

Roses are red
Violets are Blue
i’m schizophrenic
and so am I

ragingloli's avatar

charmanders are orange

AshLeigh's avatar

My television as a child had some color distortion.

blueiiznh's avatar

I am still stuck trying to ryhme something with orange

Sunny2's avatar

What’s a charmander? (This place is so enlightening.)

AshLeigh's avatar

Pokemon, @Sunny2. :)

ragingloli's avatar

a very sexy one, too

judochop's avatar

Dearest Valentine O mine.
Let’s get drunk on box wine.
We can watch the sky turn bright
From the roof top we’ll sit all night.
Forget about misguided heart muck
We can bring the sleeping bag and fuck.
Or drive a truck.
And perhaps fly on a duck.
Or lay down in the bay.
What do you say?
Till our hair turns grey.
Write love poems all day.
Read fluther we just may.
No sense to make.
Gay horses say heeeeeey.

ucme's avatar

Oh my angel heart, you’re as beautiful & serene as venus
I’d like to take you by the hand & watch you suck my pen…....... well come on, whaddya expect? ;¬}

Blackberry's avatar

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Vodka is cheaper
than dinner for two

Zomblue's avatar

Silly people

It’s:
Nothing is red
Roses are blue

I’m colorblind….
Hey! Where’d you go?

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