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Are there any book and film lovers willing to comment on something I wrote?

Asked by fuglyduckling (412points) June 14th, 2014

I wrote a scene and I am concerned its not understandable. I’d love to pm anyone who is willing to read and give some feedback!

Thanks!

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Seek's avatar

I’m game.

Seek (34808points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
filmfann's avatar

There isn’t much to it. It’s just a discussion. When you expand it, you will need to show how at least one character changes. They cannot simply reveal themselves, or define who they are.

filmfann (52487points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
Mimishu1995's avatar

PM me. I’m all ear.

Mimishu1995 (23796points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
stanleybmanly's avatar

volunteers? I’m just nosy. PLEASE let me read it.

stanleybmanly (24153points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
mazingerz88's avatar

Is it sexy-? LOL Ah yes. : )

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