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Is this an "okay" English?

Asked by LuisaMalaj (4points) September 18th, 2014

In this cartoon you can see a man in a living room sitting in a couch-chair in front of a TV. A woman – maybe his wife- is standing next to him. She has a video recorder in the right hand which is trained to him and a notebook in the other hand. The mood of the man angry and certainly he is bugged of his wife. On the bottom is the caption – it’s the statement of the woman- :” Its my new hobby. Do something interesting. This is streaming live on the internet.” The artist wants to show us that we are live in a world where media influenced our daily life. His message might be that we don’t know what to do with our free-time when nothing is around us to maintain us. In my opinion this cartoon is a perfect example for the life we live. A world full of boring people who rather sitting on the couch instead of having fun at adventures outside.

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Pachy's avatar

I like your caption. Just change “Its” to It’s.”

rojo's avatar

I would leave out the first sentence and just start with “Do something interesting…...internet!”

Pachy's avatar

Good suggestion!

whitenoise's avatar

Your final sentence seems to be missing some words:

A world full of boring people who would rather be sitting on the couch instead of than having fun at adventures outside.

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