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3, To abide by Sol LeWitt’s conception of creating geometric shapes and detailed line drawings, I create a detailed line drawing. Lines in the drawing are disciplinary, which two lines crossed are like “L”, so many different “L” lines form regular forms. To follow the most significant rules of the conception, straight lines must be crossed from corner to corner, or you can draw nothing in one square.

Although this method is simple to follow, if you tend to create a visual shape, you should plan how different lines to be regularly drawn before start to do it.

2, Vera Molnar uses simple geometric lines or shapes to create regular images and then the original images can change their forms. Although the original shapes are shown simply, through processing, these shapes become dynamic in different arithmetic.

My drawing also is low visual complexity. I utilises lines in the drawing. However, I create 4 developments if I would process this in a computer.
During the developments, these line will have a variety of movements.

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In EDWARD ZAJEC’s concept, the important elements of the drawing are drawing non or rectangular squares and usage of a black color that are darker and lighter.

I follow a method of the figure two, and make own drawing. Firstly, a matrix is inserted in one of the partitions, and a diagonal element in the matrix given is positioned. Thirdly, a vertical and horizontal line are extended from each of two ends. These lines make up this drawing, and finally the color should be drew in the drawing.