Can the sentence “One method to ....” be revised as “One method for protecting ....”?
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May 26th, 2016
Can the sentence “One method to protect against the impact is to surround the structures with works built in fill materials” be revised as “One method for protecting against the impact is surround the structures with fill materials”?
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Sentence #1:
One method to protect against the impact is to surround the structures with works built of fill materials.
Sentence #2:
One method for protecting against the impact is to surround the structure with fill materials.
Both are now corrected for proper grammar. Sentence #1 implies that the fill materials are to be within “works” which means the fill materials are to be enveloped in a sub-structure.
Sentence #2 leaves the “works” detail out. In engineering, this could be a very important detail.
To clarify on @Espiritus_Corvus‘s answer, only use “the” before impact if you are referring to a specific impact that you have already mentioned.
Also, I may be out of context here but the word “works” seems vague and unnecessary. I suggest Sentence #2.
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