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What do you guys think of my song?

Asked by Trucktruck (75points) September 9th, 2016

It’s called Superhuman.

The day that we met

Was the best day of my life

I felt hopeless

Like we didn’t have a chance

But you immediately proved me wrong

With that amazing kiss of yours

YOU SPIN ME AROUND AND AROUND IN THAT BRIGHT MOONLIGHT

AND I’M RIGHT WHERE I NEED TO BE

YOUR AMAZING MUSCLES ARE A SIGHT TO BEHOLD

I MUST HAVE DONE SOMETHING RIGHT TO DESERVE A GUY LIKE YOU

AND WHEN YOU TELL ME YOU LOVE ME

YOU BECOME SUPERHUMAN

Every day you blow me away

In a slightly different way

When you tell me it’s nothing

I lose all control

There is nothing we can’t do

With our power intertwined

YOU SPIN ME AROUND AND AROUND IN THAT BRIGHT MOONLIGHT

AND I’M RIGHT WHERE I NEED TO BE

YOUR AMAZING MUSCLES ARE A SIGHT TO BEHOLD

I MUST HAVE DONE SOMETHING RIGHT TO DESERVE A GUY LIKE YOU

AND WHEN YOU TELL ME YOU LOVE ME

YOU BECOME SUPERHUMAN

OH….. oh…..

YOU SPIN ME AROUND AND AROUND IN THAT BRIGHT MOONLIGHT

AND I’M RIGHT WHERE I NEED TO BE

YOUR AMAZING MUSCLES ARE A SIGHT TO BEHOLD

I MUST HAVE DONE SOMETHING RIGHT TO DESERVE A GUY LIKE YOU

AND WHEN YOU TELL ME YOU LOVE ME

YOU BECOME SUPERHUMAN

WHEN YOU TELL ME YOU LOVE ME

YOU BECOME SUPERHUMAN

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13 Answers

CWOTUS's avatar

Welcome to Fluther.

Hmmm … well, I have to admit that I can’t dance to it. I can’t dance to anything; but I’m just sayin’ here…

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Trucktruck's avatar

I know… I can’t think of music for it yet…

Trucktruck (75points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
Sneki95's avatar

Good one.

Now turn it metal and growl the chorus. It will sound dope.

and yeah, welcome to Fluther.

Sneki95 (7017points)“Great Answer” (2points) Flag as…
ZEPHYRA's avatar

Mmmmmm, nicely different. With good music it could become a hit, oh and with the right voice…...

ZEPHYRA (21750points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
Coloma's avatar

Has potential, but needs a tune to back up the lyrics, obviously.
I was glad to find out the subject was a guy with the line ‘Your amazing muscles are a sight to behold.” lol
Aaaah, young love, so precious!

Coloma (47193points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
Espiritus_Corvus's avatar

Dude just comes in here and throws a song at us. I like that. I like that a lot. I like the song, too.

Welcome to Fluther, @Trucktruck. I hope you hang around for awhile.

How come his GA’s aren’t registering points? Boy should get some points for his brass. I don’t think I’ve ever seen anybody with a zero before.

Espiritus_Corvus (17294points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
Cruiser's avatar

Whatever you do….don’t employ voice box modulation for your vocals.

Cruiser (40454points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
Trucktruck's avatar

What’s voice box modulation?

Trucktruck (75points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
Cruiser's avatar

@Trucktruck It is when artists employ gadgetry during recordings to modify/improve their otherwise really bad karaoke vocal tracks.

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Trucktruck's avatar

Oh, okay. Yeah, I’m certainly not using voice box modulation. Wow…

Trucktruck (75points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
CWOTUS's avatar

And whatever else you do, don’t quit your day job just yet, either…

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