Would you give me your opinion on this ad for our RV?
We’ve spent the better part of a month getting it detail cleaned. I’m going to post the ad on FB pages, along with a link to the photobucket folder with more pictures, which I have made public.
Ad (I took my number off the ad for this question.)
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Looks good to me. I might look for some details about the type online and add a link to it, to make it easier for buyers to get more info and get interested in it. When shopping for vehicles, I find I often have a barrier in not knowing what every model is like and having to do research, so if that were made easier, I’d be more likely to consider it. You could also have some details and things you’ve liked about it written up on another page which you link to.
Cosmetically, I’d try to add a little more space between the year and the model name, because they sort of look like they run together.
Font snobs might not like the font chosen for the big red text, but font snobs have their own tastes. I don’t mind it but it is breaking up a bit with the pixelization. Maybe something less fancy.
As a punctuation snob, I would de-capitalize the first letter of each feature.
Thank you! I’ll look for comparable units, and work on the ad.
This may just be a coincidence, but when I clicked on your photobucket link on my IPhone I got an immediate message that I had 6 viruses and if I didn’t click on the ok button NOW they would eat my sims card. I powered off.
Anyway, I like the ad and I’m sure you did your research on price and I think your price is reasonable. Good luck!
Oh shit! Did you have that problem @Zaku?
There is room to bargain on the price. They’re all over the board on the internet.
No, I didn’t get anything about a virus warning.
@ragingloli Haven’t you ever wanted to generate Onans? (What are you thinking?)
The space after 1995 is good, and the font is more conventional. I kind of prefer it being more reddish in color.
What do you get up to in that thing lol
Oh My God! Fluther, how I hate thee sometimes! Too, too funny @flutherother!
No I did not know that. I’ve only heard of Onan generators.
And before you learned it, you didn’t know it either.
Thanks guys. I’m posting it all over kingdom come now. Although I can’t get Onan out of my mind!
The only things I would consider adding is how many people can sleep in it. I see the picture of the bed but are there an y other pull-outs or pull-downs? Does a safa become a bed? Might be important for families. Otherwise, looks good. (And about the Onan Generator – is it hand cranked?)
To hell with the RV, how much is the Onan generator?
Sounds like you might need to hush up that Onan generator business then…
Oh @janbb, you’ve gone to the dark side too.
Well, the sofa pulls out into a bed, and the table can be moved out and an air mattress thrown down, so it pretty much sleeps as many as you can cram in there! But technically, it only sleeps 4.
It’s $17,900 @flutherother, but it comes with a FREE RV!
@Zaku you people started it.
@Dutchess_III I’m just concerned that a Puritanican anti-Onanism inquisitor might get the wrong idea…
Gave my first tour today! Nice couple. Our age.
So they are an older couple. tee hee.
Have you told them the story of Onan?
LOLL!! Rick fired up the generator and the guys says, “Is that an Onan?”
Rick said yes.
The guy said, “Yeah. They’re pretty quiet.”
I LOLd inside, thinking of you pervs and also thought, “Yeah. Quiet, except when they’re have deplorable sex!”
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