Aha. Now I think I know what you’re up to, @luigirovatti: you’re working on a TV script or series. Right?
As it happens, I watched the first Murdoch only last week. (I thought it was too bad they didn’t hire an actual actor for the Tesla role.) I wasn’t especially engaged and didn’t go on with the series, but maybe now I will. Should I skip ahead?
I watched Murder, She Wrote as it was coming out on broadcast TV, back in the 1980s, when I still watched broadcast TV (and there was no such thing as streaming video). I stayed with it for 5 or 6 seasons and enjoyed the series a lot. Angela Lansbury was a delight to watch.
There were three things about it, though, that took it rather far into the realm of the improbable:
• The number of homicides that happen right in or near tiny Cabot Cove is wildly disproportionate. I live in San Jose, where a lot of things happen, some of them not good at all, and there weren’t enough homicides logged last year to support an old-fashioned 39-episode TV series, especially if some of them were multiples. Everybody in Cabot Cove should be barricaded behind iron doors, not out gossiping by the white picket fence.
• The “old flame” and “old friend” tropes came up way too soon and way too often. And if Jessica Fletcher went to a conference, man, everybody keep your hand over your drinks and bar your hotel room door.
• The solutions hinged far too often on some kind of coincidence, such as Jessica’s seeing the way a spilled beverage puddled on a counter and suddenly realizing that the bloodstains had pooled in the wrong way. Too much irrelevant inspiration for a sudden “aha!” moment rather than actual clues and deduction.
You can’t beat the Sherlock Holmes stories for actual clues and deduction. The problem is, you can reveal the detective’s spotting of a clue among the red herrings in one line of a short story, but as a dramatized action scene it can be slow and boring unless you enhance it. How does the viewer see what the detective (or his assistant) sees and yet not see it? And if you just focus on it, you’ve killed the suspense, so you have to show irrelevant distractors too. So—presto, a lot of coincidence and divine revelation when the stories are adapted for the screen.
Likewise, the Nero Wolfe stories meet the test on paper but may be far less satisfying in dramatic form (and no one has got either Wolfe or Archie right in film).
Brother Cadfael is a perfectly lovely detective, and so beautifully written by Ellis Peters, but damn, how many stories hinge on the discovery of a tiny filament or scrap of fabric or other substance caught on a thorn, a door frame, or a reed?
Mystery fans will accept a lot of flaws for the sake of the story, but I’m sure you know they demand a puzzle with enough clues that the reader (viewer) could have figured it out, and the solution has to respect logic. Most important, of course, is that justice must be done, although it doesn’t always take the form of legal justice.