Would anyone be interested in proof reading and editing a NSFW personal story?

This past year I’ve been trying my best to start journaling my life through stories. I’m absolutely terrible when it comes to past/present tense and would appreciate if a fellow grammar-savy flutherer would assist me in looking over my story!

Not only am I trying to rid it of grammar issues but also make it overly romantic/sensual. Please message me and I’d love to send you a copy of the story for your review!